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A World Underwater by =BlueMeadow193:iconBlueMeadow193:

Categories Photography > Macro > Objects

©2009 =BlueMeadow193
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Artist's Comments

This is a photo I took for school, and I actually have two differently edited versions of it. Yet I am going to upload them separately. This is a straw in carbonated water, so enjoy! <3

EDIT: Here is the same photo, yet the editing is different. [link]

(Copyrighted 2009) - =BlueMeadow193

No one has permission to use this photo in anyway, shape, or form, without my permission, thank you.

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*Miss-Deathwish May 23, 2009, 9:47:29 AM
When I first saw this shot, I immediately fell in love with the beautiful tones and the awesome focus on the straw. The composition is great as well, and the colors are eye catching, but not in a loud 'look at me!' fashion, which works well for the photo. The vignetting is nicely done as well, giving the viewer a general idea of where the edges of the cup are. It is a playful and thought-provoking image, especially when coupled with the title (A World Underwater). It reminds me personally of childhood and fascination with little things such as fizzy soda and carbonation bubbles.

My only suggestions are perhaps cropping the image a little differently to show more of the straw, perhaps cutting off a bit more of the sides. I don't know how different this is from the raw image, but the photo may have more impact if it were more vertical as opposed to horizontal.

Overall, it is a very pleasing and cute image! I like that it is a straw that is pictured as opposed to the very common carbonated fruit/cherry shots. (:
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*ohsostarryeyed May 23, 2009, 9:14:27 AM
FAVED.
boom.

[because it's a wonderful straw and the focus is great.]

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=BlueMeadow193 May 23, 2009, 9:17:34 AM
Thank you so much! :]
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~IeuIeu May 23, 2009, 11:05:35 AM
amazing =]

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~ahlice May 23, 2009, 11:42:47 AM
I love this! The colors are really pretty.
It's amazing how you can capture so much detail through glass, I can't do that!
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~FolleH May 23, 2009, 12:45:51 PM
wooooow, very fantastic! i love the bubbles :D :D

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=BlueMeadow193 May 23, 2009, 12:53:52 PM
Thank you! Aww, I am sure you can capture photos through glass, it just takes practice! :]
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~Amaterinasu May 23, 2009, 1:40:25 PM
I love this shot. I also like the reflections in the bubbles. I am still fascinated with fizz and carbonated water.

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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D90
10/1600 second
F/6.3
105 mm
200
Mar 22, 2009, 3:28:41 AM

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